Comments

Comment to Kaila Franquist

Wow.
I really like this Kaila. I love how you used the seasons thoughout your poem.
The ending is great and powerful.
Good job!
<3 from EVA

Comment to Britany:

I like this poem! Especially the second line with "my name today most people will forget"

Good job!

Comment to Dan:

I love your poem! It has a good flow.
Good job.

Comment to Kaila:

It's cute and moving. I like it a lot Kaila (:

Nice job getting the number "10" in it.
<3Eva

Comment to Ally:

Very real! I like the line about missing it years from now and not taking youth for granted.
I haven't known you very long, but I know I'll look back and think of you years from now and smile.

Comment to Rachael:

Very beautiful poem.
And so true. Home will always be home.
Good job!